T1+Persuade

L.I. We are learning make content relevant and add weight to argument by having an effective position statement, main points, evidence and restatement. Contain elaboration of main points. E ffective position statement: __S.C. we can__
 * make our position and purpose clear
 * use a rhetorical question
 * include a list of fact/evidence that will be discussed in writing

Restatement, elaboration of main points: __S.C. We Can__
 * restate my position throughout my writing
 * make a main point and back it up with evidence or statistics

__Monday 14 March 2011__

Tauranga Intermediate  30 18th Avenue  Tauranga

__**Extended Morning Tea**__

 Dear Mr Diver

 I really appreciated it last week on Friday when you gave us an extended morning tea. I think our school should continue to have an extended morning tea every Friday as a reward for good behaviour in the week. If you were a kid wouldn't you like an extended morning tea?

 I think that the schools fitness levels will improve because people will run around more at morning tea, seeing as they have longer. I seriously think that you will see a change in the schools fitness level. Last Friday my friend came up to me and said “I hope we keep having long morning tea’s” and I thought yes that’s a good idea. I think that all the students will sit quieter in assembly seen that they had longer to get rid of all their energy.

 I know that the teachers will really enjoy having an extended morning tea every Friday. They will have longer to mark students work and they won’t be as grumpy after morning tea.

 I think it will really make students at our school behave better knowing they will get rewarded. All the students will get to class faster, and work harder when they get to class. They will be able to concentrate harder because they don’t have as much energy. It will give our school a big educational boost, and it will make school more fun. Plus it will give students something to look forward to on Friday.

 Mr Diver I Believe 2011 would be better if we had an extended morning tea every Friday.

 Yours Sincerely Ramon Hagler Rm 41 Rimu